good attempt!
This is actually a good game for a first try (to newgrounds).
next version or game, try using your own art, wich means not using sprites wich makes ppl think you are good at drawing... as a matter of fact you just posted this before i was finished with my mario party like game.
so in short if you are a i want a single sentence reviuw persom...
"nice first submission to NG, but don't use sprites next version or game"